You have made a good start here Robert and the reflection on your own experience is very good. Unfortunately, you have researched / looked up a lot of the terms and the results you have gotten are not always right, e.g., clearance. You have spent a lot of time finding quotes but I feel that you would have been better writing a bit more from what you already know rather than finding someone else’s words. For example, your section on media platforms is incorrect as the site you have found is discussing genre and not platform. Looking for information on the internet is tricky as not everyone knows what they are talking about and also, so many words have multiple meanings, you don’t always get something in the context that you need. Don’t worry though, you don’t need to do a huge amount to correct this – go through paragraph by paragraph and define the term in your own words. If you are not sure what something is, call me over and we can go through it together.
You have made a good start here Robert and the reflection on your own experience is very good. Unfortunately, you have researched / looked up a lot of the terms and the results you have gotten are not always right, e.g., clearance. You have spent a lot of time finding quotes but I feel that you would have been better writing a bit more from what you already know rather than finding someone else’s words. For example, your section on media platforms is incorrect as the site you have found is discussing genre and not platform. Looking for information on the internet is tricky as not everyone knows what they are talking about and also, so many words have multiple meanings, you don’t always get something in the context that you need. Don’t worry though, you don’t need to do a huge amount to correct this – go through paragraph by paragraph and define the term in your own words. If you are not sure what something is, call me over and we can go through it together.
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