I really like the layout of your presentation, you have made it your own and it is nice and tidy. You have covered everything needed and have provided examples and evidence.
To improve: - I am a little surprised by some of the typos - you have spelled your brand wrong on one slide and some of the very key terms are also spelled incorrectly - add more detail on how you will advertise your newly packaged product, e.g., synopsis for the advert - add print screens of UK TV listings to show when your ad could be aired - say why you have to consider particular sections of the code
Robert,
ReplyDeleteI really like the layout of your presentation, you have made it your own and it is nice and tidy. You have covered everything needed and have provided examples and evidence.
To improve:
- I am a little surprised by some of the typos - you have spelled your brand wrong on one slide and some of the very key terms are also spelled incorrectly
- add more detail on how you will advertise your newly packaged product, e.g., synopsis for the advert
- add print screens of UK TV listings to show when your ad could be aired
- say why you have to consider particular sections of the code
Ellie
Robert,
ReplyDeleteJust look again at when you have said you will advertise - is this realistic?
Ellie